It's 108 words but it's close enough,
Legend says there used to be a black balloon that floated around town. No one had ever deared to touch the balloon in fear of what might happen if it popped. But one day some kids were fooling around with the balloon and even though they knew the legends they didn't care. One of the kids held out the balloon ready for one of the other children to pop it, but just as the child came up to pop it, the balloon exploded. Only one of the children lived. But he turned mental all he could say was,
"It felt like..." And then he would just stop.
Wednesday, 21 October 2015
Tuesday, 13 October 2015
100WC
A Teddy Bears Wedding
It was at the end of the ceremony and it was time for Tedalina and Ted to go out to the car and drive to where they were going to get their photos taken. They drove up to the hills where there was a magnificent view of the town below. The pictures they got taken were beautiful, a lot of the photos were taken with the groomsmen and the bridesmaids in the car. On the way back to the reception they had a fatal crash and all the groomsmen and bridesmaids were killed, as well as the bride and groom.
By Sophie
Tuesday, 22 September 2015
Monday, 21 September 2015
100WC
100WC is back and this is the first week. This week the prompt was a sculpture with a wooden face and legs for hair. Hope you guys enjoy!
Monday, 14 September 2015
My Speech
In Rimu Class we have been writing speeches, my topic was 'High School Students Should Not Have Homework'. I enjoyed writing this speech because I found out a lot about it. Next time I would look more into my topic and get more information. I think that High school students would be better off without homework because after school they would be able to spend more time with their families, rather than be in their room doing work.
If there is anything I can improve on please let me know in the comments?
If there is anything I can improve on please let me know in the comments?
Wednesday, 9 September 2015
Blog Commenting
Writing quality comments is important because it helps you create a positive digital footprint.
Writing a Quality Blog Comment!
We are learning to write quality blog comments. Cust School has recently joined our Quadblogging list.This is a comment I did on their Blog.
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