Characture Description
Storm is a 16 year old boundary pusher, who likes the colours black, pink and blue. She always carries her phone on her in case of emergencies. Storm hates girls especially girly ones, she has a wide imagination which is always buzzing with new ideas.
Oooo I like it - just not sure about the first half of the last sentence - remember to reread and edit! You're a writing star :)
ReplyDeleteCool I like your character description! It paints a vivid picture into the readers head I like how you said that she is always buzzing with new ideas!
ReplyDeleteFrom Ashleigh at Balmacewen Intermediate.
Thanks Ashleigh
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